So Much Depends On….
Ovarian Cancer Awareness Bracelet
So much depends on
my teal
cancer bracelet
Hope, faith, courage,
strength
Are the words
I read each day
Hope, faith, courage
strength
Are the feelings
I feel each day
Because of her
My lovely soap!
So much depends on
Soap
Sweet smelling soap
The aroma fills my
nose
And I am happy because
I
Am
Clean.
Poetry Revised…
So much depends on
my beautiful teal
cancer bracelet.
“Hope, Faith, Courage,
Strength”
These words I read
each day.
“Hope, Faith, Courage,
Strength.”
These emotions I feel
each day…
…Because of Mom.
So much depends on
Soap.
Sweet smelling soap.
The succulent aroma
fills my nostrils.
And I am happy because
I
Feel
Beautiful.
I want to know more…
I love both of your poems! The poem about your bracelet is really touching. I know how much that bracelet means to you. But your poem about soap cracks me up! I really like the alliteration of the line “Sweet smelling soap.”
Candace
Wonderful poems Tiffany! I love the way you used words like “succulent” and “beautiful” as a feeling in the soap poem. And your bracelet, isn’t it neat how small things can really mean and represent so much! Great Job!
I love the words that you used in the soap poem. It really paints the image of a sweet smell in your mind. I like how you repeated yourself in the bracelet poem. It really gave me chills when I read the last line. Just the way you ended the poem gave it so much meaning. Wonderful!
Okay Tiffany I am trying to comment on your blog for the third or fourth time so hopefully it lets me!!!
Your poem about your Ovarian Cancer Awareness bracelet was really heartfelt. I liked how you repeated certain stanzas to create emphasis. Your poems are really well written. Great job!